Scream Out (Disappear)

i totally forgot to post this! whoopsies.
well, because i joined Frog Attack, Lauren Frank/Mya Ho's band, (now with Abby Rees as well) i've been writing songs lately.
so i wrote this...
it's called Scream Out (Disappear) and it sounds pretty good when sung, but just check out the lyrics for me and tell me what you think.

Scream out.

I’m lost.

Scream out.

Let me know you’re here.

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I’m drowning,

I’m crying,

I’m wishing I was safe

With you tonight.

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But still,

I’m just in my room lying on my bed.

And still,

I’m just living life without you.

And still,

I remember that you are gone.

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And I wish

That I

Could have

You back.

I wish

That I

Could erase the words that were said…

Last night.

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You were wrong,

I was right,

There’s no need to get angry,

There’s no need to pick a side.

You’ve disappeared,

You’re gone,

I’m alone.

And nothing else is here to comfort me.

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If I died

Tonight.

You would be sorry.

You never got to tell those words

That you wanted to.

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I thought it was friendship,

Thought that you cared.

But all that is left is a shell.

I don’t know who you are anymore.

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You were wrong,

I was right,

There’s no need to get angry,

There’s no need to pick a side.

You’ve disappeared,

You’re gone,

I’m alone.

And nothing else is here to comfort me.

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Lie, lie, lie, lie, lie, lie, lie

Lie, lie, lie, lie, lie, lie, lie

Lie, lie, lie, lie, lie, lie, lie

LIE

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Another story,

Another excuse.

Petty arguments.

I’ve just about given up.

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Scream out

If you’re here.

Please scream out.

I’m missing my friend,

I’m missing the one

I told my secrets to.

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But you’re not here.

You’ve gone with the rest of them.

You’re filled,

Obsessed,

With those lies.

So just leave me alone!

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You accuse me of ignorance,

Of judging too harshly.

Well, look in the mirror

To what you’ve become

And tell me that you’re not scared!

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You were wrong,

I was right,

There’s no need to get angry,

There’s no need to pick a side.

You’ve disappeared,

You’re gone,

I’m alone.

And nothing else is here to comfort me.

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Lie, lie, lie, lie, lie, lie, lie

Lie, lie, lie, lie, lie, lie, lie

Lie, lie, lie, lie, lie, lie, lie

LIE

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You were wrong,

I was right,

There’s no need to get angry,

There’s no need to pick a side.

You’ve disappeared,

You’re gone,

I’m alone.

And nothing else is here to comfort me.

tons and tons and tons of everlasting love,
alyssa